I had a very true-hearted friend
When skies were grey, he was my ray of light
and hope
He made me feel like nothing was impossible
He was indeed a true companion of mine
All he wanted was my love and time
For he was my little friend, Spike
Half a retriever and half a lab
The moment I set foot in the house, his bark
welcomed me
And all he cared for was me
For he was my little friend, Spike
His eyes started to roll
And I screamed, screamed as the world around me
seem to fall apart
For what I saw was his mouth full of froth,
His perished body on the garden floor,
His once loving eyes now fixed in a lifeless,
cold stare
Would comfort me no more
Would bark and welcome me no more
My sunshine, my happiness would come back to me
no more
For my little friend, Spike was no more.
-Avantika(ME!!!)
This was a poem I wrote quite a while ago. My schedule is a little tight at the moment, so I decided to post this one. Hope you like it. And don't forget to follow and leave a comment down!
Woah, good job with the poem portraying the qualities of human-canine friendship but I do not like the ending. It is too unhappy. Anyhow, wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteGood job!!I certainly did not expect that transition from joy and happiness to sorrow and despair...…
ReplyDeleteAnyway, its a truly wonderful read :))
Truly Touching ......Felt extremely good to read.....wanna keep on reading it....
ReplyDeleteHeart touching 😍
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
Keep writting